Burning Man Temple

A desert temple built as art beckons wounded hearts in need 
That which shades a weary soul is written on its tinder frame
The phoenix born from temple flames engulf the hurt - a healing pyre 

David Mohn
”Sijo in a Temple” Contest
06 May 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 3:47 PM
that is really cool image, a healing pyre. Lots of interesting interpretations coming out of this contest. HOpe I can do one in time!!!
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 4:23 AM
Love this one, David; you provide a restful place where one can feel the healing process. gl in contest // paul
Mohn Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thank you Paul...much appreciated
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