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Burning Embers

If things get weird Or worse then I feared At myself I will be furious And it's something I don't think you will take serious But I just don't know what you think So I sit and stare without a blink I am not ashamed when you see me glaring Because then I know back at me you are staring I wish I could read your mind Then the answer I could find But to me you are quite a mystery How will this look in our history? I want you to talk to me more Or maybe I'll just walk out the door Your voice on the phone so pure It is all of my illnesses cure I wish I knew just what you see Your view of you, and of me I hope you talk to me about it one day But for now in your life I will stay I'll be that girl who's always there Who about, you might just care So while you flirt with other girls remember For you my heart is burning like embers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/11/2009 4:38:00 PM
Couplet form Jen. paired end rhyme/couplet; work a bit more on the meter Jen. Nice write!!!! Light & Love debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/10/2009 5:56:00 PM
Am I being to wordy??? ~Jen~
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