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Burning Candle

Low flame hovering Shadows dancing soundlessly Ribbon of new smoke 26/06/2017

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Date: 6/20/2023 7:21:00 PM
Like that last line…ribbon of new smoke…interesting imagery to ponder
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Date: 6/30/2017 8:50:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 7/4/2017 1:22:00 AM
thanks Funom :D
Date: 6/26/2017 10:05:00 PM
This a lovely image, PHoenix.
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 6/27/2017 12:30:00 AM
thxs Andrea :)

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