Burning Candle

Low flame hovering
Shadows dancing soundlessly  
Ribbon of new smoke 


26/06/2017
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Like that last line…ribbon of new smoke…interesting imagery to ponder
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 8:50 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
Szentesi Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 1:22 AM
thanks Funom :D
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 10:05 PM
This a lovely image, PHoenix.
Szentesi Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:30 AM
thxs Andrea :)
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