Burning Bell

We lay flowers on the grave
never gave them to the living
we put them in fancy vases
when we finally say I love you
a sundial whispers -it's too late 

You think you've mastered forever
'til forever scratches at your graying door
dreams never fly without feathers of hope
blowing away like Mojave Desert gold

Limestone hearts worn away by indifference
everybody's taking -so very little giving
everybody's sitting in the same dark cave
talking to the saddened shadows of themselves
hearing only the echo of their desperation
sliding into the mouth of the burning bell.




Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/25/2024 3:13:00 PM
Very deep poem with beautiful poetic descriptions, Anthony! This one needs to be read more than once to get the full impact..excellent! :)
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 10/26/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, for your kind words God bless Anthony
Date: 10/25/2024 3:13:00 PM
Ps- A Fave!
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Date: 10/23/2024 1:18:00 AM
Dear anthony, unfortunately this is the truth, real talk here, so much depth in your poem, your opening plus also these lines i couldnt help but agree, as ive noticed too, “ everybody's taking -so very little giving everybody's sitting in the same dark cave ” one of those lines one should print out frame them! So powerful and resonates! youv said it all in a very poetic manner with beautiful rhymes ! Pleasure reading your work today
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 11/9/2024 5:18:00 PM
Thank you Ink, I'm glad you got so much out of this poem Bless you Anthony
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