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Burning

I know when I see red I can feel the heat I can smell the smoke I know to
run like hell when I open my eyes and see blood shut and tears when 
I look in the mirrow I see when I start to walk down the street all I can
feel is defeat although it's day light I can't break free

I can't take the anguish anymore my heart my mind my soul is all 
wrapped in this horrible tell  I can't feel nothin but hell when is my destiny 
going to change when is my life going to go to a higher plane when I think
it's over it get's hotter and hotter until I can barley stand   


One day it suddenlty came to an end everything suddently became calm 
the  leaves on the trees slowly began to fall I started  to say what happened
to all of the pain and suffering I began to see the evil suddenly leave the eyes
of the evil now I can smile Ican speak 


I'ts all over today I can see my way pass the dark shadows of the terror of 
halloween and the darkness of the costumes that peek the streets I know  that
god is always looking, standing, walking, all around me to protect me from the 
evils of halloween.    





Copywritten@October 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/5/2013 1:51:00 PM
- A very well written poem .... many deep feelings you "put on paper" - A good work Patricia! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 2:15:00 PM
Awww Thank you Anne Lise I plan on reading much more of your work. I enjoy reading your work.

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