Burned

Hiss, Hiss, Snap goes the lighter
And he walks ahead
Just like a fighter
Click, Click, kaching goes the money
And he leaves with his poison
Why am I laughing? This isn't funny
But I can't help but laugh, laugh, laugh
My face hurts
My mind is starting to drift
And boom! Something bursts
I'm the boss of me
And I'm not so right
What do I do
I'm losing my own fight
Who is this?
This isn't me
I can't believe what I see
Hiss, hiss, snap goes the lighter
And he passes it round
Down, down, down, goes the fighter
We all make a sound
Crash, crash, crash
We are heading
Burn, burn, burn, we are burning
But, no one is learning
What did I do?
What was I thinking?
I can't believe I wanted to
I'm the boss of me
And I'm not so right
What do I do?
When I let myself lose sight
Who is this?
Who is she?
What did I do?
Is this me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 24, 2026 at 10:16 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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March 28, 2016 at 8:01 PM
Rebecca Berezin, awesome poem. LINDA
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August 10, 2015 at 11:02 PM
REBECCA, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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April 10, 2013 at 10:26 PM
!!!
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October 31, 2012 at 11:35 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Rebecca. Hope to read more of it soon. Love, Carol
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October 30, 2012 at 6:19 PM
oh this is so true and well written of how I'm feeling right now, bless you dear one, you've read my soul. xo
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October 30, 2012 at 2:39 PM
- Well written, Rebecca. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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