Burn To Your Eye

Awaken from a dream I feel my heart pounding
My skin warm to the touch of lust
A stir within my soul is all flamed
Shadows of you stand at the wall
I hear your sound of last gasps
A chemistry of two dissolving intime

Dreams are sent like gods from the minds
A thought is mine now yours
You read my dream you are my dreams 
Touch my mind from your inner being
Finger tips undress my every inch
I play to your tease even to the finish

A race deep from want
I burn to your eye
I breathe to the heat 
You send me to the darkest corner
You are the demon from ones spirit
My passion is all of a candle rising as it is lit

Distance is not between us
Undertstanding is my feeling
A rose bud to bloom 
You are the dancing moth to the flame in me 
One pull and I am down on the floor
Your love is raw as the stormed wave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/11/2012 5:20:00 PM
Wow. Very entertaining poem, frenzied with irrepressible emotion and intensely decorated with stylish metaphors. I very much liked this one. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:55:00 AM
chemistry and function vs. the disfunctional,is all about the synthesizing of thoughts and bring all the elements together as one whole....dancing too and swaying with the same flame must be a special form of unity h-u-h !? :) ...nice...peace , jay
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