Burn By Winter

Crush then love, whispers then shouts, sun and moon, screams and shouts. Hearts are broken and will be for sure, mistakes are made for they always occur. I lied to you once but your actions lied back our love fought for its life but fell off track. An empty heart is filled with sorrow, love today leads to anger tomorrow. Full moon in the sky, a flood on the ground I can hear your hatred though you don’t make a sound. Free fall from heaven and into your hell, I’ve lost my mind to this nothing will ever be well. Sadness and black will fill your soul like demons inside it will take its toll. A fire will freeze your empty heart; your cruel mind will fall apart. Your eyes will see what you left behind but you won’t comprehend it with your close hearted mind. The cold that came from your early morning attack will leave you stranded on ice that will crack. Your mistake you made will leave you weak but when your demons come I won’t hear your shriek. You deserve what you get I hope you can tell, you are a hypocrite; you made your hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/18/2012 11:55:00 AM
I stopped by your poetry today to see if you have written anything new Travis. I hope that you will pick up your pen and write a new poem very soon and share it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:43:00 AM
very well written, im impressed. -katie
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Date: 1/9/2012 5:21:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Travis. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2012 10:45:00 PM
very strong and expressive feelings , well done, Brenda : )
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