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Burlap and Satin

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Undine is a female name derived from the word for ‘Little Wave’.

Bequeathed between two golden sheets Undine dims the light in candle’s ululation Reposed she rescues dusky husky groans Low and behold her mountain quivers Among the valley’s heezed pleasures’ height Pure nubile hessian rugs unfold a magic matching ride Alleviated sorrow levitates small lusty deaths Nirvana nestles breezes sweet surrender Dharma shivers solemnly four noble truths Serenity and Serendipity shine Sex and Senses At altitude of fiery fabric one drape of Burlan Transposes skin on skin much more than satin In love she trusts when smooth vibrations Nurse naked native nights engulfed in sated touch 10th March 2018 ACROSTIC

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2018 3:54:00 PM

Creative winning work. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/31/2018 8:53:00 AM

Passion vividly described--in an acrostic! Congrats on your win, Kia! Janice

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/1/2018 3:50:00 AM

Thank you Janice. As my wife says, 'it is a beautiful day and we are in it.' Raining from buckets in Johannesburg and the roof is leaking...but that does not matter in the wider scheme of things. Many wishes, Kai

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2018 9:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kai, great write! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/31/2018 5:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve. All the best Easter wishes to you as well. No Easter eggs today but poetry and love. Many hugs and wishes, Kai

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/30/2018 7:49:00 PM

Very clever acrostic. Congrats on your win, well done, Kai.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/31/2018 5:16:00 AM

Thanks you very much Line. Your praise means a lot to me. Happy Easter. Kai

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2018 7:42:00 PM

Wow......you reach above and beyond as a poet! This is no exception, Kai! Impressive as always!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/31/2018 5:16:00 AM

Thank you Carrie. Many wishes to you, Kai

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/30/2018 7:31:00 PM

A great Acrostic, well-written with amazing sensual imagery, Kai. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/31/2018 5:18:00 AM

Thank you for your praise Sandra. Happy Easter, Kai

Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2018 3:07:00 PM

Indeed, a passionate Acrostic, Kai! Your take on this theme is creative. Regards // paul

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/31/2018 5:19:00 AM

Thank you very much for your compliment. Have a good Easter. Many wishes, Kai

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/13/2018 1:46:00 AM

An awesome Acrostic story! Well thought out. Passionate imagery. I enjoyed.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/31/2018 5:20:00 AM

Thank you Susan, for reading and liking. Many wishes, Kai

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/10/2018 5:33:00 PM

Oh so breathtaking Kai. A sumptuous and passionate poem, every line is an absolute beauty of expression and imagery - your last line, especially, is simply stunning! I enjoyed the artistry and elegance of your poem!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/11/2018 12:36:00 AM

Thank you Susan. I like acrostics, you never know what appears on the sceen. Many wishes, Kai

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/10/2018 11:38:00 AM

A sultry passionate write Kai, well done...

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/11/2018 12:35:00 AM

Thank you Charlie. Many wishes, Kai

Marc Acrich

Date: 3/10/2018 8:21:00 AM

Your poem to me is what a poem is supposed to sound like, mine is witty rhymes that tell stories i noticed your numbers are low like mine, so it means you are new Any chance you want to add a video to your poems I can help you with that, I can't help you adding a picture I can't get it Let me know it's real easy, I have a poem the Roman guards and i have a bunch of them marching i think its awesome https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/iam_a_roman_centurion_guard_994986

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/11/2018 12:32:00 AM

Thank you Marc. I will get back to you on the video. On holiday at the moment and off to see my daughter play Internationl Rugby. Kai

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/10/2018 7:36:00 AM

Beautifuly done Kai, I've never attempted an N acrostic might give it a go some time.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/11/2018 12:30:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I appreciate that. You must try an acrostic some time. They are easier than you think. Many wishes, Kai