Kai Michael Neumann Poet Acrostic

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Undine is a female name derived from the word for ‘Little Wave’.

Burlap and Satin

Bequeathed between two golden sheets

Undine dims the light in candle’s ululation 

Reposed she rescues dusky husky groans

Low and behold her mountain quivers

Among the valley’s heezed pleasures’ height

Pure nubile hessian rugs unfold a magic matching ride

Alleviated sorrow levitates small lusty deaths

Nirvana nestles breezes sweet surrender

Dharma shivers solemnly four noble truths

Serenity and Serendipity shine Sex and Senses

At altitude of fiery fabric one drape of Burlan

Transposes skin on skin much more than satin

In love she trusts when smooth vibrations

Nurse naked native nights engulfed in sated touch



10th March 2018 ACROSTIC

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Sara Kendrick April 3, 2018 at 3:54 PM Creative winning work. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara

Janice Canerdy March 31, 2018 at 8:53 AM Passion vividly described--in an acrostic! Congrats on your win, Kia! Janice Kai Michael Neumann April 1, 2018 at 3:50 AM Thank you Janice. As my wife says, 'it is a beautiful day and we are in it.' Raining from buckets in Johannesburg and the roof is leaking...but that does not matter in the wider scheme of things. Many wishes, Kai

Eve Roper March 30, 2018 at 9:44 PM Congratulations on your win, Kai, great write! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:14 AM Thank you so much Eve. All the best Easter wishes to you as well. No Easter eggs today but poetry and love. Many hugs and wishes, Kai

Line Gauthier March 30, 2018 at 7:49 PM Very clever acrostic. Congrats on your win, well done, Kai. Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:16 AM Thanks you very much Line. Your praise means a lot to me. Happy Easter. Kai

Carrie Richards March 30, 2018 at 7:42 PM Wow......you reach above and beyond as a poet! This is no exception, Kai! Impressive as always! Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:16 AM Thank you Carrie. Many wishes to you, Kai

Sandra Haight March 30, 2018 at 7:31 PM A great Acrostic, well-written with amazing sensual imagery, Kai. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:18 AM Thank you for your praise Sandra. Happy Easter, Kai

Paul Callus March 30, 2018 at 3:07 PM Indeed, a passionate Acrostic, Kai! Your take on this theme is creative. Regards // paul Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:19 AM Thank you very much for your compliment. Have a good Easter. Many wishes, Kai

Susan Gentry March 13, 2018 at 1:46 AM An awesome Acrostic story! Well thought out. Passionate imagery. I enjoyed. Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:20 AM Thank you Susan, for reading and liking. Many wishes, Kai

Susan Ashley March 10, 2018 at 5:33 PM Oh so breathtaking Kai. A sumptuous and passionate poem, every line is an absolute beauty of expression and imagery - your last line, especially, is simply stunning! I enjoyed the artistry and elegance of your poem! Kai Michael Neumann March 11, 2018 at 12:36 AM Thank you Susan. I like acrostics, you never know what appears on the sceen. Many wishes, Kai

Charlie Smith March 10, 2018 at 11:38 AM A sultry passionate write Kai, well done... Kai Michael Neumann March 11, 2018 at 12:35 AM Thank you Charlie. Many wishes, Kai

Marc Acrich March 10, 2018 at 8:21 AM Your poem to me is what a poem is supposed to sound like, mine is witty rhymes that tell stories i noticed your numbers are low like mine, so it means you are new Any chance you want to add a video to your poems I can help you with that, I can't help you adding a picture I can't get it Let me know it's real easy, I have a poem the Roman guards and i have a bunch of them marching i think its awesome https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/iam_a_roman_centurion_guard_994986 Kai Michael Neumann March 11, 2018 at 12:32 AM Thank you Marc. I will get back to you on the video. On holiday at the moment and off to see my daughter play Internationl Rugby. Kai

Tom Cunningham March 10, 2018 at 7:36 AM Beautifuly done Kai, I've never attempted an N acrostic might give it a go some time. Kai Michael Neumann March 11, 2018 at 12:30 AM Thank you Tom. I appreciate that. You must try an acrostic some time. They are easier than you think. Many wishes, Kai