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Buried Treasure

prize prised from glass phial wondrous wanderings await map scratched on parchment purpose nigh fulfilled past tall trees, ten paces North what lies 'neath soft soil? efforts reap rewards cherished childhood toy unearthed party game enjoyed ---------------------------------------- 26th March 2017 For the "Vernal 2017" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Date: 4/21/2017 5:25:00 AM
Looking for buried treasure, even if only a game, can yield much satisfaction, as does this string of senryu, John. Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 4/22/2017 3:39:00 AM
Very kind of you to say so, Paul. Glad you enjoyed it! Regards, John.
Date: 3/26/2017 3:49:00 PM
love how this one ended, with finding the childhood toy!! Good luck in the contest. ONe never knows how they will do in a contest of Brian!!
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John Michaels
Date: 4/22/2017 3:38:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea (sorry not responded to this comment earlier - think it slipped through the net). All the best, John.

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