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Buried in Wait

Buried in wait This handwritten note As tidal caresses Soothe a patient scroll Forsaken sands keep vigil As Silence screams from beyond the bottle 19 July 2014 Poet Destroyer’s Contest: One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku- In A Bottle

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Date: 8/21/2014 11:53:00 PM
Congrats Mark. Spectacular.... Tim
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Date: 8/21/2014 5:26:00 AM
Creative write. congrats on the win
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:25:00 PM
This one is striking in its depth. Congrats on your win!!!!
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Date: 8/20/2014 3:21:00 PM
I'm glad to see this one finally on the winners' list. BIG congrats to you,Mark
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:42:00 AM
Mark, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/9/2014 8:33:00 PM
did this one ever get judged?? What the heck is up with that contest? Am waiting to see all the winners, and in my box, I think it said I didn't make the list. So where IS the list???
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Date: 8/5/2014 3:18:00 PM
great expression, especially the last one. I am not sure, but I am thinking you can only show ONE senryu. the second one would be my choice for just one!!
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Date: 8/7/2014 1:53:00 AM
hey thanks Andrea, wasn't to sure what a solo senryu/haiku was... I like the style of poetry though!
Date: 8/5/2014 6:24:00 AM
Very expressive work that you have penned the meaning hidden within the lines is quite sad..I appreciate you stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:04:00 AM
Very nicely done my friend... Good luck in the contest!
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