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Buried In Wait

Buried in wait
This handwritten note
As tidal caresses

Soothe a patient scroll
Forsaken sands keep vigil
As Silence screams from beyond the bottle

19 July 2014
Poet Destroyer’s Contest: One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku- In A Bottle

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Tim Smith Date: 8/21/2014 11:53:00 PM Congrats Mark. Spectacular.... Tim Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/21/2014 5:26:00 AM Creative write. congrats on the win Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 8/20/2014 10:25:00 PM This one is striking in its depth. Congrats on your win!!!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/20/2014 3:21:00 PM I'm glad to see this one finally on the winners' list. BIG congrats to you,Mark Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/20/2014 9:42:00 AM Mark, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/9/2014 8:33:00 PM did this one ever get judged?? What the heck is up with that contest? Am waiting to see all the winners, and in my box, I think it said I didn't make the list. So where IS the list??? Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2014 3:18:00 PM great expression, especially the last one. I am not sure, but I am thinking you can only show ONE senryu. the second one would be my choice for just one!! Login to Reply Mark Trichet Date: 8/7/2014 1:53:00 AM hey thanks Andrea, wasn't to sure what a solo senryu/haiku was... I like the style of poetry though!

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/5/2014 6:24:00 AM Very expressive work that you have penned the meaning hidden within the lines is quite sad..I appreciate you stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 7/27/2014 12:04:00 AM Very nicely done my friend... Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply