Mark Trichet Poet Haiku

Buried In Wait

Buried in wait
This handwritten note
As tidal caresses

Soothe a patient scroll
Forsaken sands keep vigil
As Silence screams from beyond the bottle

19 July 2014
Poet Destroyer’s Contest: One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku- In A Bottle

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Tim Smith August 21, 2014 at 11:53 PM Congrats Mark. Spectacular.... Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta August 21, 2014 at 5:26 AM Creative write. congrats on the win

Robert Lindley August 20, 2014 at 10:25 PM This one is striking in its depth. Congrats on your win!!!!

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2014 at 3:21 PM I'm glad to see this one finally on the winners' list. BIG congrats to you,Mark

Poet Destroyer A August 20, 2014 at 9:42 AM Mark, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2014 at 8:33 PM did this one ever get judged?? What the heck is up with that contest? Am waiting to see all the winners, and in my box, I think it said I didn't make the list. So where IS the list???

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2014 at 3:18 PM great expression, especially the last one. I am not sure, but I am thinking you can only show ONE senryu. the second one would be my choice for just one!! Mark Trichet August 7, 2014 at 1:53 AM hey thanks Andrea, wasn't to sure what a solo senryu/haiku was... I like the style of poetry though!

Sara Kendrick August 5, 2014 at 6:24 AM Very expressive work that you have penned the meaning hidden within the lines is quite sad..I appreciate you stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Robert Lindley July 27, 2014 at 12:04 AM Very nicely done my friend... Good luck in the contest!