Melani Udaeta Poet Other

Buried Answers Trimeric

An abandoned treehouse left to rot
intrigued a pair of inquisitive teens;
Suspended in the air like a starship 
a haven for Gulf coast runaways; 

Intrigued a pair of inquisitive teens 
approached it’s elevated pathway;
So much loitered so still was the wind;

Suspended in the air like a starship,
who built it way out in the sticks?
Surely the location was by design;

A haven for Gulf coast runaways;
Four walls of incoherent ramblings
as a diary hid buried with the answers.

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Danny Derden June 18, 2025 at 2:28 PM This poem has a wonderful sense of mystery and intrigue! The imagery of the "abandoned treehouse" as a "starship" is particularly striking, and the way you weave in the idea of hidden secrets and "incoherent ramblings" creates a really captivating atmosphere. It makes the reader want to know more about this place and the stories it holds. Melani Udaeta June 18, 2025 at 5:17 PM Thank you so much. I appreciate the kind feedback. Blessings.