burial

b u r y me amongst corpse flowers b a p t i s e d under ~ soporific rain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 8:27:00 PM

This time I made sure to look up the word soporific. It goes so well with death. Congrats. This is another one I had seen previously but had no remembrance of who wrote it!

Sara Jama
Date: 5/30/2025 9:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for placing me in your contest.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/9/2025 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s poetry contest with a soporific write. Wishing you a delightful day.

Sara Jama
Date: 5/30/2025 9:32:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2025 7:53:00 AM

Brian sure has a lot of awesome haiku winners. Another one here. Congrats!

Sara Jama
Date: 5/9/2025 8:02:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/7/2025 11:29:00 AM

Gosh why must i think of your burial now? Atleast now its burying not cremating hah! Grumpy you make even hiku dark and gothic! This is beyond creative! Love it! Best wishes! Sending you light

Sara Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Ink. You know I can go really dark. Hahaha