Sara Jama Poet Haiku

burial

b u r y me 
                 amongst  
corpse flowers b
                             a
                              p
                                t
                                  i
                                  s
                                    e
                                      d 
                                         under ~
       soporific rain

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Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2025 at 8:27 PM This time I made sure to look up the word soporific. It goes so well with death. Congrats. This is another one I had seen previously but had no remembrance of who wrote it! Sara Jama May 30, 2025 at 9:33 AM Thank you so much for placing me in your contest.

Krishnanand Guptar May 9, 2025 at 10:31 AM Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s poetry contest with a soporific write. Wishing you a delightful day. Sara Jama May 30, 2025 at 9:32 AM Thank you so much.

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2025 at 7:53 AM Brian sure has a lot of awesome haiku winners. Another one here. Congrats! Sara Jama May 9, 2025 at 8:02 AM Thank you very much.

Ink Empress May 7, 2025 at 11:29 AM Gosh why must i think of your burial now? Atleast now its burying not cremating hah! Grumpy you make even hiku dark and gothic! This is beyond creative! Love it! Best wishes! Sending you light Sara Jama May 8, 2025 at 4:43 AM Thank you Ink. You know I can go really dark. Hahaha