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Buoyancy of Oyster Blue Dreams

Floating on a warm, oceanic wave Tropical drowsiness drifting, eyelids falling into corral reef fantasies Oyster blue dreams, aquatic Atlantis awaiting Deep billowy yearning to reach the lost heart treasure buried A smile glowing in the undercurrent shadows has a cerulean luminosity It draws my fetching mind to the sea floor core of your needful symbiotic design Arising together to the surface to greet the dawn sunlight Buoyancy is a SOS message in a bottle resiliency Oyster blue dreams has opened up my heart and swallowed all of my empty This poem was inspired by the talented poet Jannie Breedt's poem, "Love Amputees"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/1/2018 4:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Freddie. Your metaphors are very 'fetching' indeed...Maria
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Date: 12/27/2017 10:28:00 AM
You definately were inspired Freddie. As always a pleasure to read your words.
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Date: 12/27/2017 8:33:00 AM
Great poem inspired by another great poet.. Loved that title also..
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Date: 12/26/2017 10:35:00 PM
Hey My friend, I always love your metaphors and your catchy titles. I am honoured that I could be mentioned and inspire you. Deeply humbled too. Thamk you for your kindness and friendship.and that I may be deserving. (Im also quite surpriaed that I am still.allowed to be here after my latest risquè attempt "Arrivals" The thought police have booted me off 3 wattsapp groups- my mouth amd me) Lovely write here. Congratulations. Love always my brother
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Date: 12/26/2017 2:13:00 PM
Well done Freddie, beautiful flow. no pun intended, dreamy for sure.....
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