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Bumblebees Intimidation

Bumblebees kiss Lamb's Ear
Drink nectar from tiny blossoms
I dare not go too near
For their sting is very awesome

Inspired by Brian Strand's latest contest
but not an entry..

Awesome: Intimidating

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Gary Fields Date: 6/21/2011 2:51:00 AM You have intimidation written all over this! A beesting isn't but so bad.....SEE MY POEM BEESTING.....YOU WILL SEE1 you have captured the outter most in trepidation to an fine art....... It's the style and disclosure that make's the poem! Keep the write-up, Up! Your friend in the pen/GARYFIELDS Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/24/2011 9:01:00 PM very nice on the plight of the bumblebees and I know I do run from those stingers..Sara.. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/24/2011 2:31:00 PM you know it is really funny, i spent my whole child hood, without getting stung by a bee, then when i was around 45 i got stung for the first time, and since then it has happened 2 or 3 more tmes, so i really freak out when a bee gets near me. this was a great poem and good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Two Apples and yes it is in the contest as far as i know anyway. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/24/2011 2:14:00 PM sara, about abelard, yes he WAS a priest. After his love affair with Heloise was thwarted,he joined the priesthood and she became a nun. And only they wrote letters to each other in all those years. Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 5/24/2011 11:21:00 AM This one too is a fine one,,truly awesome sting..love, gautami Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/24/2011 6:36:00 AM Another beautiful rhyming poem from you Sara.Enjoyed. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/23/2011 11:43:00 PM ps: Heloise and Abelard is a very interesting story. Let me know if you would like me to tell you about them in a soupmail. Maybe I could even blog about it. It's a pretty tragic tale. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/23/2011 11:42:00 PM I like this one just as much, Sara. an awesome sting. An interesting way to say it! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/23/2011 5:15:00 PM Nice inspiration taken so well, sara Login to Reply

Matt Hunt Date: 5/23/2011 2:57:00 PM I hear that! Bumblebees hurt! I thought this would be very good in the contest as well. Keep up the wonderful work:D Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/23/2011 10:38:00 AM Sara, I hear you. The bumblebees scare me too. Still remember the first time I got stung. Brian's contest inspired a great write! Love the one you entered as well. Love, carolyn Login to Reply