Bumblebee

a fat bumblebee zooms by off to find his flower flying ever so high he has a mystic power such a wicked little thing he is potent for his size one tiny bumblebee sting produces such cries he is magnificent though for a miniature beast he'll put on a show attacking when you expect it least off to his nectar for now but soon he'll buzz by and you'll ask yourself how can he sting just to die

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Date: 1/11/2012 8:40:00 AM
omg yes they hurt i was stung more than once in my childhood lmao =)
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Audrey Decker
Date: 1/16/2012 8:28:00 AM
Me too john, but I still can't help but never kill one. I always capture them in a jar an release them. My friends think I am crazy but, we have lost enough of them already. Thanks, Audrey
Date: 1/3/2012 1:44:00 PM
I like this fat bumblebee...OXOX love Anne-Lise
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Audrey Decker
Date: 1/16/2012 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Anna Lise Audrey
Date: 12/20/2011 6:36:00 PM
Bees are amazing little workers. love the pen great write.
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Audrey Decker
Date: 1/16/2012 8:26:00 AM
thanks Lisa, they sure are wonderful little workers aren't they. Audrey
Date: 12/16/2011 3:06:00 PM
Don't you just love them and they don't bother unless provoked. They are necessary little creatures to pollinate and rapidly disappearing.
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Audrey Decker
Date: 1/16/2012 8:25:00 AM
So true, I work as a gardener and I have certainly noticed less bees every year. Thank you Elizabeth!
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