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Bumble Bee

Buzzing around with your trademark sound Utilizing nectar Master pollinator Body covered in fuzzy hair Lively colours Envelope with flair Beautiful announcement of summer they bring Environmentalists your praise they sing Energetic little friend let us not see your end

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/20/2019 10:51:00 PM

Hello Francis … I don't think the bumblebee has made its way to Australia, but I have read about admiration for them in Europe. Nicely described - thank you Francis - Lindsay

Frances Byrne
Date: 8/20/2019 10:57:00 PM

Hi Lindsay, Our bees are so important, yours too, unfortunately our changing environment is not being kind to them. Thanks for your compliment, appreciated. Frances

Niall Fulham

Date: 8/9/2019 3:23:00 PM

Hi Frances, Wonderful write , you sure know your bumble bee, love the last line,,Energetic little friend let us not see your end,,,I have to say this write is brilliant ::)))Hugs

Frances Byrne
Date: 8/9/2019 4:14:00 PM

Hi Niall, Thanks for commenting, I appreciate your support, as always. Frances