Bullet

I shoot in her heart
And now she is falling fast.
A bullet of love.
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Date - 21st April 2017

lovesenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2017 at 5:58 PM

I meant to say LAST line. You had liked the last part of my monoku and I really like the last line of this senyru.

Augustus Black

August 3, 2017 at 12:47 PM

Thanks a lot Mam. - A.B

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2017 at 5:57 PM

Great line YOU have too, Augustus!

Silent One

July 28, 2017 at 2:37 PM

Awesome...love it!

Augustus Black

July 29, 2017 at 12:20 AM

Thank You. Sir. A.B

Doug Vinson

April 21, 2017 at 2:19 PM

Cheers, Augustus. That is one of the better guns.

Augustus Black

June 24, 2017 at 9:28 AM

Thanks - AB

Jan Allison

April 21, 2017 at 7:30 AM

I hope your bullet hit the bullseye Augustus:-) hugs jan xx

Augustus Black

April 21, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Thanks a lot. Mam... Hope I will be back soon to enjoy your writing. Take care... Hugs.

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