Bullet

I shoot in her heart And now she is falling fast. A bullet of love. ____________________________ Date - 21st April 2017

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Date: 8/1/2017 5:58:00 PM

I meant to say LAST line. You had liked the last part of my monoku and I really like the last line of this senyru.

Augustus Black
Date: 8/3/2017 12:47:00 PM

Thanks a lot Mam. - A.B

Date: 8/1/2017 5:57:00 PM

Great line YOU have too, Augustus!

Date: 7/28/2017 2:37:00 PM

Awesome...love it!

Augustus Black
Date: 7/29/2017 12:20:00 AM

Thank You. Sir. A.B

Date: 4/21/2017 2:19:00 PM

Cheers, Augustus. That is one of the better guns.

Augustus Black
Date: 6/24/2017 9:28:00 AM

Thanks - AB

Date: 4/21/2017 7:30:00 AM

I hope your bullet hit the bullseye Augustus:-) hugs jan xx

Augustus Black
Date: 4/21/2017 9:07:00 AM

Thanks a lot. Mam... Hope I will be back soon to enjoy your writing. Take care... Hugs.