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Bulbs In Cool Spring Burst

Bulbs in cool spring burst Open fields of lemon stars ... Apes the skies above

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Date: 7/8/2010 5:00:00 PM

What a creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 7/5/2010 3:21:00 AM

Tremenduous picture captured here. it lifts the spirits. Thank you for taking the trouble to comment on my 'Crubeens'

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/4/2010 10:25:00 PM

lovely images, nice haiku

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/2/2010 5:34:00 PM

There is nothing in the spring like a great garden of wonderful and sparkling flowers. I can see the images in this poem. Great job! Joseph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2010 10:38:00 AM

lol colorful images,, enjoyed..P.D.

De R

Date: 7/2/2010 9:51:00 AM

Great use of imagery...Interesting play of words-'lemon stars' Great job!Emily

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/2/2010 7:51:00 AM

You have me thinking of yellow tulips, Earle. Delightful haiku! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2010 7:05:00 AM

Very interesting Haiku that you have penned..That would be a field of beauty..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Keep the magical pen flowing wonderful descriptive thoughts onto the pad for us here at soup to read..Sara