Building Castles

castles in the cloud
fluffy white cotton candy
dreams in transition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 5:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 14, 2016 at 1:33 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Nithya :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Venkat Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Anne Lise Andersen, thank you for the warm welcome.
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March 12, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Nithya Venkat, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Venkat Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:08 PM
SKAT A thank you for the warm welcome and the lovely smile.
Shines Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Beautiful :)
Venkat Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:08 PM
kenisha shines thank you.
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Nithya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Venkat Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Poet Destroyer A thank you for your warm welcome. I will read your poems.
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