Building a House On Sand

Building a House on Sand

By Elton Camp

Alabama has some frontage on the Gulf Coast
Where the risk of storm damage is the most

People with money will build right on the beach
Instead of where a hurricane isn’t likely to reach

Then for all of us, house insurance rates will rise
Because they have acted so foolishly unwise

We live way up north, a long way from the shore
But due to those dolts we are forced to pay more

I’d also enjoy having a beach and ocean front view
But don’t as it’s a totally irresponsible thing to do

On such construction there should be a total ban
Or else let insurance rates there rise as they can

Now, when a hurricane comes and blows them away
At our expense rebuild so it can happen another day

Life insurance to a skydiver might rightly be denied
To some houses, that same principle should be applied

Maybe for existing construction exception can be made
But building new houses on the sand should be forbade

A beach dweller reading this may scream and curse
I don’t care as I’m tired of your reaching into our purse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/29/2011 2:09:00 PM
Hi Elton, this is so true. I never can understand why people want to own homes in areas where they know nature will destory. This is definitely one for many areas worldwide
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