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My humbled tribute to King Ludwig ll of Bavaria, Germany. To me he was just awesome

"Key to my heart" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter.

 

 

Builder of Dreams -Key To My Heart

(Key To My Heart) The Sun glows On your Radiant Nice face Deep eyes********So blue Beautiful face mind and body too Fairy tale Prince you stand so tall Wonderful King in all Fantastic dream builder Oh beautiful King Unforgettable True Prince You shine You were Always A dreamer Music art Lover You built Unique Dreams Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000@2011 copyright@2014 October,8,2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Haight Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Dorian, what a beautifully written tribute, and such an awesome "key to my heart" shape you created! I'm sure it difficult to select imaginative and meaningful words to use in these restrictive spaces. Definitely a 7 for me. Sandra
Bateman Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Dorian, I can tell your liked King Ludwig II of Bavaria. I live here in Germany, albeit in Niedersachsen (Lowery Saxony) near Hannover in north central Germany. But I am very familiar with the various principality monarchs like King Ludwig II from the earlier years in Bavaria and Baden Württemberg. Your tribute quite nice and I like the shape poem them, that is, in the form of a key. Most Superb and a Most Superb "7" from me!! Cheers, Gary
May Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:51 AM
A lovely tribute Dorian....best wishes
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:31 AM
what a beautiful tribute and an incredible shape poem Dorian - i am in awe:-) hugs jan xxx
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