Bucolic Bliss

golden paddies sway in sync as soft wind strokes their
cheeks ~ white herons squawk


Date: 08/15/2021
For A Brian Strand 1,2,3,4, or 5 Line Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Ooh…this is beautiful!
Brul Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 9:46 PM
What a wonderful monoku. It speaks a lot. I love the alliteration you brilliantly weaved here. congratulations!
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Must be an amazing sight Ani when the golden rays of sun shine on them. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 2:34 PM
oh this is marvelous, dear. Big congrats. I wonder if I've missed other new poems of yours. Let me go see.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Dear Anita, how beautiful Monuku! Golden Paddies!! Yes, it’s true - a gorgeous sight! Love ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Reading your Monoku again. This has volumes of meanings. Congratulations on your win. Want more from you.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Wonderful. God bless you with love, Gina
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Beautiful. Wonderful description of Nature. I am missing your writings. Keep writing. Thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 3:57 AM
A beautiful Indian panorama. Hugs
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