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Buckle Up

One man one woman Upon a horse they did ride Till off it she slid

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Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 2:41:00 AM

HI CAROL, only if you want. I know PD (my sister), is forever a fan of Carol's. She got banned/blocked for blogging about fake accounts. Now we are trying to ask TPS to bring her back. Would you pretty please give a little support on one of the blogs for PD... Justin has a new one. But Nikko, is so caring. Love SKAT

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/17/2015 6:39:00 PM

To much of the saddle soap 'no doubt' enjoyed this slippery tale Carol, all the best Joe..'

Joseph Burchett

Date: 1/31/2012 10:02:00 AM

Love it :-)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2012 3:17:00 PM

so funny! Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 1/10/2012 3:33:00 PM

the horse did glide, no his name wasn't El Cid.... sorry Carol just playing... Well done here, love it ....Don

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/10/2012 6:48:00 AM

the very first rhyme I ever learned was called "BUCKLE UP"....way back in preschool or Kindergarten! I hope u come back! I diGG your stuff!

Milton Toran

Date: 1/9/2012 1:24:00 PM

Did she survive the fall? LOL!!...Milt

Kathryn Collins

Date: 1/9/2012 7:56:00 AM

very cute! Kathy

John Castro

Date: 1/6/2012 1:41:00 PM

when i was 4 years old i stole a horse named bj in alaska and rode him through the forrest the horse finally brought me home. i dont know if i stole him or he stole me =)

Jack Horne

Date: 1/4/2012 3:02:00 PM

LOL, what a sense of humour you've got, Carol. Thanks for all your sweet comments x

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/29/2011 7:08:00 AM

It is fantastic,Carol.You have knitted the words very well.Thank you for all the nice comments on my poems.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/27/2011 3:47:00 AM

Hahaha, Carol! Didn't had a horse ride for many years, but once I enjoyed a trip on horseback for a week in Chile. Nicely written Senryu!...Love, Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2011 5:51:00 PM

Cute..Got a chuckle..Just what I needed..Sad though also..I hope she was okay..It reminded me when my children were young and we got them a small horse..She would head to the nearest limb and knock them off..She didn't stay with us long..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/22/2011 12:58:00 PM

Ahh the truth & farce of life,,,in counterpoint to intent and expectations Carol,, just what happens is what will be..)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/22/2011 8:45:00 AM

Enjoyed it..Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, jag

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/22/2011 6:29:00 AM

Absolute truth of human life, where cordial relationship exists. ".....Till off it she slid". Really practically happens. Thanks, bl

Judy Ball

Date: 12/22/2011 3:34:00 AM

HAHA What a rude end to a nice ride. He should have told her it was eimportant to hang on tight and try to keep her balance. Cute picture you describe here. Maybe he shouldn't have trotted the horse. God Bless, JB ;)

John Rhinem

Date: 12/21/2011 11:21:00 PM

Smile ˜ Tis somewhat of a mystery as unto exactly how and perhaps why her loveliness I Am certain, slid from the moment, my dear precious Carol ˜ Either or hopefully for all concerned alls well that ends well ˜ Thank you for the sweet kind visit ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ My love to you & yours, always, John!:) ˜