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Buckle Up

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Buckle Up

One man one woman
Upon a horse they did ride
Till off it she slid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 5/5/2016 2:41:00 AM
HI CAROL, only if you want. I know PD (my sister), is forever a fan of Carol's. She got banned/blocked for blogging about fake accounts. Now we are trying to ask TPS to bring her back. Would you pretty please give a little support on one of the blogs for PD... Justin has a new one. But Nikko, is so caring. Love SKAT
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Date: 5/17/2015 6:39:00 PM
To much of the saddle soap 'no doubt' enjoyed this slippery tale Carol, all the best Joe..'
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:02:00 AM
Love it :-)
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:17:00 PM
so funny! Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2012 3:33:00 PM
the horse did glide, no his name wasn't El Cid.... sorry Carol just playing... Well done here, love it ....Don
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:48:00 AM
the very first rhyme I ever learned was called "BUCKLE UP"....way back in preschool or Kindergarten! I hope u come back! I diGG your stuff!
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:24:00 PM
Did she survive the fall? LOL!!...Milt
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Date: 1/9/2012 7:56:00 AM
very cute! Kathy
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Date: 1/6/2012 1:41:00 PM
when i was 4 years old i stole a horse named bj in alaska and rode him through the forrest the horse finally brought me home. i dont know if i stole him or he stole me =)
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:02:00 PM
LOL, what a sense of humour you've got, Carol. Thanks for all your sweet comments x
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:08:00 AM
It is fantastic,Carol.You have knitted the words very well.Thank you for all the nice comments on my poems.
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:47:00 AM
Hahaha, Carol! Didn't had a horse ride for many years, but once I enjoyed a trip on horseback for a week in Chile. Nicely written Senryu!...Love, Gert
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Date: 12/22/2011 5:51:00 PM
Cute..Got a chuckle..Just what I needed..Sad though also..I hope she was okay..It reminded me when my children were young and we got them a small horse..She would head to the nearest limb and knock them off..She didn't stay with us long..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 12/22/2011 12:58:00 PM
Ahh the truth & farce of life,,,in counterpoint to intent and expectations Carol,, just what happens is what will be..)
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:45:00 AM
Enjoyed it..Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, jag
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:29:00 AM
Absolute truth of human life, where cordial relationship exists. ".....Till off it she slid". Really practically happens. Thanks, bl
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Date: 12/22/2011 3:34:00 AM
HAHA What a rude end to a nice ride. He should have told her it was eimportant to hang on tight and try to keep her balance. Cute picture you describe here. Maybe he shouldn't have trotted the horse. God Bless, JB ;)
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Date: 12/21/2011 11:21:00 PM
Smile ˜ Tis somewhat of a mystery as unto exactly how and perhaps why her loveliness I Am certain, slid from the moment, my dear precious Carol ˜ Either or hopefully for all concerned alls well that ends well ˜ Thank you for the sweet kind visit ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ My love to you & yours, always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 12/21/2011 6:05:00 PM
Cool Carol, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/21/2011 5:43:00 PM
Nice poem. Thank you for reading mine.
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Date: 12/21/2011 4:53:00 PM
She must be the Fanny Brice in the JingleBells song!!
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Date: 12/21/2011 4:47:00 PM
Thank you for the chuckle, it would probably be me sliding off the horse. Enjoyed this. Janet
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Date: 12/21/2011 3:42:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one Carol. Thanks for the day brightener and for your kind comment. Merry Christmas my friend! Karen
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Date: 12/21/2011 3:33:00 PM
I laughed at this one. Have great day!! Jancarl
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Date: 12/21/2011 3:26:00 PM
That bumping around will do it! Enjoyed the ride anyway Carol, Have the best Christmas ever! :)
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