Buckle Up

One man one woman
Upon a horse they did ride
Till off it she slid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 5, 2016 at 2:41 AM
HI CAROL, only if you want. I know PD (my sister), is forever a fan of Carol's. She got banned/blocked for blogging about fake accounts. Now we are trying to ask TPS to bring her back. Would you pretty please give a little support on one of the blogs for PD... Justin has a new one. But Nikko, is so caring. Love SKAT
Maverick Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 6:39 PM
To much of the saddle soap 'no doubt' enjoyed this slippery tale Carol, all the best Joe..'
Burchett Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Love it :-)
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 3:17 PM
so funny! Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 3:33 PM
the horse did glide, no his name wasn't El Cid.... sorry Carol just playing... Well done here, love it ....Don
Mister Roboto Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:48 AM
the very first rhyme I ever learned was called "BUCKLE UP"....way back in preschool or Kindergarten! I hope u come back! I diGG your stuff!
Toran Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Did she survive the fall? LOL!!...Milt
Collins Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:56 AM
very cute! Kathy
Castro Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 1:41 PM
when i was 4 years old i stole a horse named bj in alaska and rode him through the forrest the horse finally brought me home. i dont know if i stole him or he stole me =)
Horne Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 3:02 PM
LOL, what a sense of humour you've got, Carol. Thanks for all your sweet comments x
M V Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 7:08 AM
It is fantastic,Carol.You have knitted the words very well.Thank you for all the nice comments on my poems.
Knop Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:47 AM
Hahaha, Carol! Didn't had a horse ride for many years, but once I enjoyed a trip on horseback for a week in Chile. Nicely written Senryu!...Love, Gert
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Cute..Got a chuckle..Just what I needed..Sad though also..I hope she was okay..It reminded me when my children were young and we got them a small horse..She would head to the nearest limb and knock them off..She didn't stay with us long..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
Maverick Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Ahh the truth & farce of life,,,in counterpoint to intent and expectations Carol,, just what happens is what will be..)
Nair Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Enjoyed it..Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, jag
Devnath  Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Absolute truth of human life, where cordial relationship exists. ".....Till off it she slid". Really practically happens. Thanks, bl
Ball Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 3:34 AM
HAHA What a rude end to a nice ride. He should have told her it was eimportant to hang on tight and try to keep her balance. Cute picture you describe here. Maybe he shouldn't have trotted the horse. God Bless, JB ;)
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December 21, 2011 at 11:21 PM
Smile ˜ Tis somewhat of a mystery as unto exactly how and perhaps why her loveliness I Am certain, slid from the moment, my dear precious Carol ˜ Either or hopefully for all concerned alls well that ends well ˜ Thank you for the sweet kind visit ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ My love to you & yours, always, John!:) ˜
Freeman Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Cool Carol, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Agape, Moses
Gelb Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Nice poem. Thank you for reading mine.
Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 4:53 PM
She must be the Fanny Brice in the JingleBells song!!
Vick Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Thank you for the chuckle, it would probably be me sliding off the horse. Enjoyed this. Janet
Campi Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 3:33 PM
I laughed at this one. Have great day!! Jancarl
Wesley Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 3:26 PM
That bumping around will do it! Enjoyed the ride anyway Carol, Have the best Christmas ever! :)
Okonkwo Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Good rhyme, Carol...enjoyed reading.O.O
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