Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

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Bucket List

berries we have picked
are still warm from summer sun---

                  mom has ruby lips



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Traditional Haiku Contest: Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
6/1/15

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Skat A July 3, 2015 at 7:16 PM Carrie, this one is nice, sounds like fun... i like berries. Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM lovely imagery enjoyed this haiku, good luck in the contest:) *luv, p.d.

Lee Carter July 1, 2015 at 11:48 PM Love this : )