Bubbles

By and by you might just agree.
Undeniably life is just floating free.
Babies are gorgeous, we all do agree.
Blowing bubbles, there are cute to see.
Living life is the same, to some degree.
Each one of us looking out in esprit,
Seeking way out of life’s, bubbles spree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 12, 2011 at 12:40 AM
Very nice combo of acrostic and rhyme, Cecil. Enjoyed the reference to children blowing bubbles and even more the way we try to make our way through life without having someone burst our bubble. Great entry for Deb's contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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September 12, 2011 at 2:05 AM
Thank You Carolyn for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment,,,although this is not for the contest since it is not freeverse,,though it was inspired from it,,Thank You again,,,Blessings..Cecil
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