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Bubbles

Me, a floating bubble,
proudly dancing,
in the mighty river of time.

Copyright © Jenish Somadas | Year Posted 2019

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March 1, 2020 at 8:30 PM

Indeed, I feel there is so much here, Jenish. A bubble is effervescent but fragile, like life itself. I love that you compared yourself to a floating bubble. A beautiful haiku. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

March 1, 2020 at 9:28 PM

Thank you Susan for that wonderful words..

Kai Michael Neumann

February 2, 2020 at 5:02 AM

Beautiful ...

February 2, 2020 at 6:39 AM

Thank you Kai for your time to read and comment on my poems

Richard Lamoureux

November 30, 2019 at 7:45 AM

A bubble rises above circumstances.

November 30, 2019 at 10:52 PM

Yes.. But it burst any time..

November 27, 2019 at 11:20 AM

Wow... Again a nice haiku ..... we are all bubbles floating around .. ...Thanks for sharing.

November 27, 2019 at 10:33 PM

Thank you for your kind words..

November 22, 2019 at 10:18 PM

WOW! I admire.

November 23, 2019 at 10:47 PM

Thank you..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 20, 2019 at 9:35 AM

Wonderful!

November 20, 2019 at 10:40 PM

Thank you Maureen...

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