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Bubbles

Me, a floating bubble, proudly dancing, in the mighty river of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/1/2020 8:30:00 PM
Indeed, I feel there is so much here, Jenish. A bubble is effervescent but fragile, like life itself. I love that you compared yourself to a floating bubble. A beautiful haiku. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/1/2020 9:28:00 PM
Thank you Susan for that wonderful words..
Date: 2/2/2020 5:02:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Kai for your time to read and comment on my poems
Date: 11/30/2019 7:45:00 AM
A bubble rises above circumstances.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/30/2019 10:52:00 PM
Yes.. But it burst any time..
Date: 11/27/2019 11:20:00 AM
Wow... Again a nice haiku ..... we are all bubbles floating around .. ...Thanks for sharing.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/27/2019 10:33:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words..
Date: 11/22/2019 10:18:00 PM
WOW! I admire.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/23/2019 10:47:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/20/2019 9:35:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/20/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Maureen...