Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

Bubble,Bubble

"Bubble, Bubble..."

Long ago and far away
A naieve mermaid born
In a bubble--purest blue--
Was hailed by harp and horn...

"Look! It's so!" They all did say,
"So beautiful! So sweet!
Soft golden hair to cuddle
And green eyes--obsolete!"

To and 'fro the tides did sway
The mermaid as she grew
Aloft within her bubble
Until each storm was through...

So it goes unto this day
The mermaid tightly holds
Her bubble--and without view--
For keeping in untolds...

deborah burch©
4/15/2012

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Tracy Edwards April 19, 2012 at 8:56 PM Hey Debs Congrats on your featured poem xxxx Hugs Trace

Sara Kendrick April 19, 2012 at 4:52 PM Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2012 at 3:32 PM Sweet and cute bubble, bubble story....well done Deborah!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Charmaine Chircop April 19, 2012 at 10:19 AM I love this sweet story.. I love mermaids...yay :)

Rockman Pritts April 17, 2012 at 10:44 PM Well done. A Pleasant image from below the sea. Good write. Rockman :-) Deborah Burch April 17, 2012 at 11:02 PM thank you Randy... :) this too, is an allagory...a great deal of my pieces are...lol thank you so much for reading my work...big hugs, love deb and thanks for the input and honesty! :)

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2012 at 10:41 PM hey, you made your own mermaid legend. Unique and fun to read!!! Rockman Pritts April 17, 2012 at 10:50 PM I see by your replies to Andrea that you're a sculptor and an artist as well. You're hands are filled with many talents. May they never end. Rockman :-) Deborah Burch April 16, 2012 at 11:33 PM oh, I've sculpted a clay mermaid with her 'bubble' and will be working on sketching/painting pics!! :) Deborah Burch April 16, 2012 at 11:31 PM thanks Andy...I hadn't thought of that...may I use that idea? I already have one other 'mermaid' that follows suit...THANK YOU... what a blessing...big hugs--thinking of you,love deb

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 4:20 PM A creative undersea tale, Deb! A great write. Blessings, Rhonda :)) Deborah Burch April 16, 2012 at 11:29 PM lol, thank you Rhonda...big hugs,much love, deb

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 16, 2012 at 12:12 PM very nice write ,I love it. Deborah Burch April 16, 2012 at 11:29 PM thank you elliot :)

Michael J. Falotico April 16, 2012 at 11:19 AM I did get your SoupMail hun. Thanks for the birthday wishes and your comments about my blog. Tracie knows I love her and this is just my view of the whole picture in poem thing. Luv to you always Michael Deborah Burch April 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM Thank you Michael dear...and I know you love everybody ;) me too....big huggss,love deb

Black Eyed Susan April 16, 2012 at 11:04 AM nice story - leaves me wondering :)

Susan Simpkins April 16, 2012 at 10:09 AM cute poem

Joann Grisetti April 16, 2012 at 9:30 AM A lovely tale of life under the sea. Can only imagine the 'untolds'.