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Bubble Bubble

I close my eyes, So I can't see Anything in front of me. The future is looking bleak, I close my mouth It's useless to speak, The world feels like A massive bubble, Full of heartache, Treachery and trouble. We need strength And togetherness, So we may rid ourselves, Of this awful mess, To burst this bubble. With a pin, Spilling out, All hate and sin.

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/12/2022 11:01:00 AM

Ah but to enjoy the childish pleasure of popping bubbles . . . . .

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/12/2022 5:59:00 PM

I can hardly wait for that to happen.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2022 4:05:00 AM

- So true and a great comparison ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/12/2022 6:03:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I hope you are enjoying your day. Take care ... Shirley

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/12/2022 3:46:00 AM

I just love this. It's wonderful. Love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/12/2022 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Gina, I think everyone has had enough of the happenings over the past few years. Hopefully, 2020 will bring more peace into the world. God Bless you, Gina. Take care. Shirley.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2022 11:35:00 PM

It's a phase usually a wintry one. Think of the roses of spring, the blue of heaven. Be positive...look who's talking :)

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/12/2022 6:16:00 PM

Thank you, Victor, for your very positive and encouraging comment. I am still smiling at your last three words. I hope you are smiling too. Take care. Shirley

Deb M

Date: 1/11/2022 10:01:00 PM

Hi Shirley I like this poem a lot well written indeed! Debx

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/12/2022 6:19:00 PM

Hi, Deb, Many thanks for your kind comment. Keep Happy. Take care. ShirleyX