Shirley Hawkins Poet Verse

Bubble Bubble

I close my eyes,
So I can't see
Anything in front of me.
The future is looking bleak,
I close my mouth
It's useless to speak,
The world feels like
A massive bubble,
Full of heartache,
Treachery and trouble.
We need strength
And togetherness,
So we may rid ourselves,
Of this awful mess,
To burst this bubble.
With a pin,
Spilling out,
All hate and sin.

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Rico Leffanta January 12, 2022 at 11:01 AM Ah but to enjoy the childish pleasure of popping bubbles . . . . . Shirley Hawkins January 12, 2022 at 5:59 PM I can hardly wait for that to happen.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2022 at 4:05 AM - So true and a great comparison ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Shirley Hawkins January 12, 2022 at 6:03 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise. I hope you are enjoying your day. Take care ... Shirley

Regina Mcintosh January 12, 2022 at 3:46 AM I just love this. It's wonderful. Love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina Shirley Hawkins January 12, 2022 at 6:11 PM Thank you, Gina, I think everyone has had enough of the happenings over the past few years. Hopefully, 2020 will bring more peace into the world. God Bless you, Gina. Take care. Shirley.

Victor Buhagiar January 11, 2022 at 11:35 PM It's a phase usually a wintry one. Think of the roses of spring, the blue of heaven. Be positive...look who's talking :) Shirley Hawkins January 12, 2022 at 6:16 PM Thank you, Victor, for your very positive and encouraging comment. I am still smiling at your last three words. I hope you are smiling too. Take care. Shirley

Deb M January 11, 2022 at 10:01 PM Hi Shirley I like this poem a lot well written indeed! Debx Shirley Hawkins January 12, 2022 at 6:19 PM Hi, Deb, Many thanks for your kind comment. Keep Happy. Take care. ShirleyX