Brunch

between nine and noon a murky realm emerges… french toast next to pie

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2015 8:45:00 PM

oh now this is quite picturesque!! A good chuckler!!

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:31:00 PM

DAVID, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 11:00:00 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning haiku david! Great work!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:47:00 PM

David :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~

Cona Adams

Date: 3/28/2015 9:20:00 AM

Nice one, David. This qualifies also as Senryu, excellently.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2015 10:53:00 PM

Brunch is a most interesting concept. I really like this one, DAvid. Thanks for your comment today.