Bruised

Intoxicated and full of mirth
so naive and carefree.
Unfurled itself 
in the breeze that seemed spring.
Dreadfully dispersed and torn asunder. 
Wounds adorn its bosom now;
bruised and deformed
it waits for the Dusk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mister Roboto Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 9:59 PM
This one has a simple message which resonates with me. I enjoy reading a nice write. ~JSLambert
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 12:51 PM
I finally am getting around to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry, it is truly appreciated Bishnu. Love, Carol
Campbell Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:31 AM
Very well written, great form, and such a strong combination and use of powerful words.
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Well expressed thoughts on getting bruised, bishnu
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October 2, 2010 at 4:50 AM
enjoyed reading toay...Welcome to poetry soup!
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