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Bruce the Golden Koi

Bruce the golden koi...
the great white shark of the pond
— culling of koi fry

5/2/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

May 3, 2018 at 11:54 PM

cool image of him as the pond's shark, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

May 3, 2018 at 11:55 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Carolyn Devonshire

May 2, 2018 at 4:41 PM

Let's stand up for the integrity of the pond and send the koi packing! Witty words, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

May 2, 2018 at 6:41 PM

Thanks, Carolyn!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

May 2, 2018 at 12:58 PM

Aw, such a cool write, Kim. Beauty wound up in the belly tho'. Lol! Must be kismet ... I had the word "shark" in my poem today. Ty for the kind comment as well. I love your work too. Fine cuisine poetry this poem be. Love and hugs always.

Kim Rodrigues

May 2, 2018 at 1:14 PM

LOL! Thanks, my friend! Blessings to you! xx