Bruce the Golden Koi

Bruce the golden koi... the great white shark of the pond — culling of koi fry 5/2/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2018 11:54:00 PM

cool image of him as the pond's shark, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2018 11:55:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/2/2018 4:41:00 PM

Let's stand up for the integrity of the pond and send the koi packing! Witty words, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 6:41:00 PM

Thanks, Carolyn!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/2/2018 12:58:00 PM

Aw, such a cool write, Kim. Beauty wound up in the belly tho'. Lol! Must be kismet ... I had the word "shark" in my poem today. Ty for the kind comment as well. I love your work too. Fine cuisine poetry this poem be. Love and hugs always.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 1:14:00 PM

LOL! Thanks, my friend! Blessings to you! xx

Dean Wood

Date: 5/2/2018 12:23:00 PM

Sounds like a mean one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 12:30:00 PM

A big one, anyway! LOL!