Nette Onclaud Poet Acrostic

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Andrea Dietrich's 'Time for Dessert - Acrostic Challenge 2' Contest

BROWNIES

B ewitched by the tempting flavor of cocoa 
R ave I must about sweet butter drips and nuts; 
O ozing with moist squares of fluffy treat
W here my tongue rolls from sinful pleasure:
N ibble after nibble, I quiver from  desire,
I nviting senses to bite through rich, dark, curves
E nthralled by eve's  delicacies...Oh, I
S ubmit to an indulgent craving ...untamed!


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Paula Goldsmith April 20, 2026 at 8:17 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "BROWNIES" write again. Have a blessed day with your win................

Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2026 at 12:41 PM I love your description of brownies. i prefer them with frosting! Thanks for participating and thanks for my win in your last contest.

Moon Harp April 15, 2026 at 11:10 PM Nette, What a delicious acrostic! And what a great last line here in this poem.

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 9, 2026 at 4:33 PM Dear Nette, there is a distinct intensity in the word "untamed." We spend so much of our energy curating our lives and maintaining a disciplined front, but the sensory pull of a "dark curve" or a "sinful pleasure", oh how thin that veneer actually is. I’ve sat with that kind of surrender before, an honest, visceral piece of humanity. Blessings, Nette, Daniel

Michael Ramel April 8, 2026 at 1:14 PM OK now I want a brownie....thanks for sharing this frosted acrostic Nette

Paula Goldsmith April 8, 2026 at 11:29 AM What a wonderful write for the great "BROWNIES." Now I want one. You baking??? Then I am eating. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" I did, "COCONUT CAKE." Have a fun day writing away............