Brown Thrasher

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brown thrasher lands ice skates across birdbath.... wings take flight Happened on 01-10-2023 Written: 01-11-2023

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Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 1/12/2023 1:21:00 AM

Nice haiku! Nothing superfluous! Elizabeth

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2023 2:36:00 AM

Thank you, Elizabeth. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2023 7:36:00 PM

What a vivid, vibrant image you've created in this haiku, Sara. Resonates so well with me. ~ Taking Wing

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2023 2:34:00 AM

Gershon, It was amazing really what I saw from the kitchen window, but of course, it was not that frozen or snowy here just some ice on the birdbath. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/11/2023 2:36:00 PM

Sweet imagery!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2023 2:32:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2023 6:59:00 AM

- Lovely written, Sara - (don't forget to feed the little birds this winter) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2023 9:14:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I haven't forgotten but I am not feeding them like I once did. There has been a good bit of seeds leftover from summer flowers, but I need to put out a little food this afternoon. I bought some suet when I last got some groceries, so I plan on putting it out. It is about time they probably start thinking about nesting. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2023 6:14:00 AM

Well-crafted haiku, Sara. You capture a nice picture of the thrasher skating on ice and taking a flight.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2023 9:10:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara