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Brown Sugar

**Double Acrostic**

****Brown Sugar****


Bourbon complexion small tight frame, fancy.
Rhythm sensual, untamed yet so classy. 
Overall a perfect ten, infectiously sassy!  
Wily this temptress, like the modern day  
Nefertiti, I kneel before this empress

Sweet never sour, passionate to the core.
Understanding, we've built a strong rapport.
Glamorous, she is everything and more. Her
Alluring imperfections most impressive.
Rapturous, I yearn for her defection!


Jared Pickett
8/4/2014
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nicole Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 6:26 PM
"Sweet never sour, passionate to the core- Alluring imperfections most impressive.." She sounds like a dream come true. This is beautiful, romantic and loving. From the heart. You need to hold onto her and never let go. My best to you. :) Brandy
Walker  Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:41 PM
You are the romantic and your poems in with romantic content are awesome! Enjoyed... Verlena
Chircop Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:28 AM
I feel a guy who is in love..lost in love indeed enough to find imperfections alluring.I can feel a heartbeat in your wanton words Jared.
Smith Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 9:09 PM
She must be amazing.
Pickett Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 11:30 PM
Very much so!! ;jp)
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