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Brown Eyes

Brown eyes that matched her hair Sad and unhappy as she stood there Waiting for her love to return, maybe yes maybe never, only time will tell Such sad brown eyes that matched her hair Tied from behind in the most romantic way Head slightly tilted gazing down in despair Looking but not looking, staring into space Memories, dancing inside her head As she spoke silently “He promised to return” Talking to herself said… “I had to believe What am I to do this is just my grief” Time is just a lie man invented it to be wise When two lovers are together It doesn’t need Einstein. He gave such a wonderful love Love only known to a lonely heart For what is life if not with him, I prefer to die. Fool I am to think he will return He’s been gone so long maybe minutes maybe days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 2/4/2013 2:36:00 AM
Thank you all. I am most pleased with your support! Thanks once again.
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Date: 2/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 12:54:00 PM
This tugs deeply at the sad. Blessings to you and yours. Congrats on your winning spot in the contest.
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:23:00 PM
Hello Ali,Congratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2013 9:06:00 PM
My eyes are brown,,, i can view this person, as ~me~ standing in your poem... a sad awaiting ending... thank you ever so much for the nice and lovely comments... always & forever Linda...
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:15:00 AM
You are welcome Linda. Glad you liked it! We await that's what we do always! Hope is a wonderful bliss, it's what keeps us going. Don't you think? Have a great day and thank you for all your wonderful comments. I'm grateful to you, love Ali