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I saw myself in a mirror, one I was not allowed to see, when he spoke so loud, I didn't notice that the monster was me.Though i left with good intentions and a clear mind, i didn't see the heart that i broke way behind. I see now that i was wrong and im proud of you, never in my shadow or your own. i can't protect you now. please, little brother know i love you and ill stand beside always. dont leave me in the water you drowned in first.

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Date: 4/26/2019 5:53:00 AM
Darling poem, expressing thoughtfulness and love in the most pure way- through poetry! Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 4/24/2019 4:12:00 PM
Achingly beautiful! Heartfelt poetic words unfolding wounds of the heart and worries of the mind.. a pleasure to read.. best regards and blessings..
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