Brother

Up high above or down below where ever will you go? A glimmering sky a flower be to be observed through glass I see Over yonder around the bend till midnight skies or till I say when Regrets are harsh Lies much worse Where will you go After this verse I miss you so Author-SJS '08

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John Heck

Date: 12/28/2008 10:30:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/13/2008 8:40:00 PM

So touching and so sad. You were kind to comment on my poem, said you were just beginning to write, however, your work is first class. Good luck, keep writing, and I find that it helps to heal, if what you write is based on true life experience. Best Wishes...and again..welcome to the Soup! ~Carrie

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/13/2008 3:59:00 PM

I was truly touched by your words... Nice write... *Breana*