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Broomsage Sunset

I gathered broomsage this morning down where the bunnies hide This patch of chosen broomsage had grown to terrific heights For it was well watered, down close to the creekside Bubbling from the ground was a spring as a tide It was easy to gather for I had my sharpened scythe Now to bundle it together and do as God's great wish I am to make broomsage brush; paint the evening sky A beautiful sunset for everyone to spy God provided five different paints in buckets just for me All colors that will make a sunset that is colored true There are two buckets of yellow ample supply For God knows I love yellow sunsets for my eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 5:02:00 AM
Good Morning Sara, enjoyed reading your work in progress this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:52:00 PM
check the the in the last line, don't seem right.
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:49:00 PM
If I could paint the world... Ohhhh, it might not be good....HeHe......Good write here my friend... Thought provoking......:JP]
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:10:00 PM
Very interesting how you did this like paint colors. I loved the third and fourth stanzas. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:45:00 AM
I am still working on this one. Sara
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