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Brookside In the Breeze

in the bliss of blooms
in the richness of old gold
chattering I hear

day of fresh breezes
in luxurious summer
brookside in fragrance

starry-eyed starling
his song carried by the wind
a romantic dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Neumann Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 12:02 AM
Absolutely wonderful ...
Buehler Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 11:46 AM
I'm so pleased. Thank you.
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:10 AM
WoW! Evelyn, First all I want to say I loved the video with the guys playing the violin and piano. It sounded a amazing. It was a good choice to accompany your well written string of haikus. I found them to be full of imagery, content and tranquility. I loved the view. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alexis. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poetry and music. Blessings :=) Evelyn
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 2:49 AM
Three lovely haikus..
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:07 AM
Thank you, Silent One.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 2:46 AM
You're lucky to be able to write such beautiful haikus. I am a failure at that. ~~
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:08 AM
Some forms come easier to us than others. Thank you very much. :)
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Refreshing, relaxing... serene! Beautiful haiku, Evelyn! :) Gershon
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 7:23 PM
I love writing haikus-brevity is always a fun challenge. Thank you for the joyful remarks. :)
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