Bj Legros Kelley Poet Rhyme

Brooks

Lovely Brooks traversed through

                               The desert and the glens

                          From Mountains leaping sunshine

                                 Back to the sea again

                        Onward now the glittered shore afar

                                  Sure leaning heart   

                           Toward silvery paths of stars

                        Sweetest joys in wonderous place

                          Beaming love on every face

                      Brooks of joy, beyond Earth's bend

                                    Now onward flow, 

                                 Farewell sweet friend

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Victor Buhagiar May 19, 2023 at 1:26 AM This is indeed a joyous song. Loved it. Bj Legros Kelley May 23, 2023 at 10:16 PM I am delighted to hear this Victor, I am incredibly blessed :) Thank you!

Anon Y'Mous May 18, 2023 at 9:55 PM BJ... Thank You for a great vision of a beautiful place. Love it. Bj Legros Kelley May 23, 2023 at 10:15 PM Yes, it is written about a very sweet place, and a very precious destination for beloved and sweet Brooks...the wondering paths leading to the sea of destiny and gathered together on the beautiful shores of joy. Your comment is such a blessing to me :)

Vijay Pandit May 18, 2023 at 4:35 AM What a pleasant start to your delightful poem, BJ: Lovely brooks traversed through the desert and the glens From Mountains leaping sunshine Back to the sea again---A FAVE from me for the sweetest joys in wonderous place you convey. Bj Legros Kelley May 23, 2023 at 10:06 PM Vijay, the honor of your fave is very heart lifting to me, thank you for your visit and sweet words, as well as the fave :)

Victor Buhagiar May 18, 2023 at 1:11 AM Every line is so romantic. Bj Legros Kelley May 23, 2023 at 10:05 PM Thank you Victor, I appreciate your visit and comment :)