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Brooks

Lovely Brooks traversed through The desert and the glens From Mountains leaping sunshine Back to the sea again Onward now the glittered shore afar Sure leaning heart Toward silvery paths of stars Sweetest joys in wonderous place Beaming love on every face Brooks of joy, beyond Earth's bend Now onward flow, Farewell sweet friend

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/19/2023 1:26:00 AM

This is indeed a joyous song. Loved it.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 10:16:00 PM

I am delighted to hear this Victor, I am incredibly blessed :) Thank you!

Anon Y'Mous

Date: 5/18/2023 9:55:00 PM

BJ... Thank You for a great vision of a beautiful place. Love it.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 10:15:00 PM

Yes, it is written about a very sweet place, and a very precious destination for beloved and sweet Brooks...the wondering paths leading to the sea of destiny and gathered together on the beautiful shores of joy. Your comment is such a blessing to me :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2023 4:35:00 AM

What a pleasant start to your delightful poem, BJ: Lovely brooks traversed through the desert and the glens From Mountains leaping sunshine Back to the sea again---A FAVE from me for the sweetest joys in wonderous place you convey.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 10:06:00 PM

Vijay, the honor of your fave is very heart lifting to me, thank you for your visit and sweet words, as well as the fave :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/18/2023 1:11:00 AM

Every line is so romantic.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 10:05:00 PM

Thank you Victor, I appreciate your visit and comment :)