Brokenhearted Sunsets

The veins of brokenhearted sunsets, blue cuts that scratch the glacial eye. Raw with mercurial redness of debts, locked down with crocodile jaws that die. Breathless air in cataract twilight, undeserved beauty of heartbroken despair. If this curtain falls, will be but morning’s slight. Surely the skies will fail to repair. For without your transcendent eyes, a certain color of turquoise ceases to exist, the ruddy splash of the universe bids goodbye, and only one pillow holds my fist. 1/23/2018 Joseph May’s One In Five

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Date: 2/18/2018 7:42:00 PM
Wow...powerful. Congrats. bbn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2018 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara!
Date: 2/15/2018 10:56:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Kim - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 10:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend! :) Blessings Kim
Date: 2/12/2018 3:09:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 1/24/2018 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful. Your last stanza is truly amazing!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, Dale! :)
Date: 1/24/2018 7:47:00 AM
Interesting thought, without eyes does colour exist? An intriguing write. Thanks for your visit this morning.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 11:57:00 AM
You’re welcome and likewise! Thank you!
Date: 1/24/2018 6:02:00 AM
To write with such fineness, broken-hearted sunsets, poetry divine! A winner in my book. Faved! Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, Mick! :)
Date: 1/24/2018 4:02:00 AM
Just admirable dear, Kim! Good luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/24/2018 1:39:00 AM
This poem is simply superb Kim! Lexicon used to be most impactful and profound. The best example of why I love reading poetry! I am sure to see this beauty in the winner's circle! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 5:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Connie!
Date: 1/23/2018 7:14:00 PM
A sadly emotional, beautifully tragic poem Kim. Every line graced with dramatic and gorgeous imagery.. a breathtaking and captivating write. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2018 7:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! ...Kim
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