Brokenhearted

All I feel is pain
Haunted by past memories,
Leaves me all depressed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neal Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 5:25 PM
depression is a hard thing to face. I hope things work out for you.
Bird Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 8:46 PM
Yes, the brokenhearted path is a hard one to travel. the pain feels like 10,000 knives cutting into you all at once with a very dull blade. A powerful and moving Senryu!
Matheny Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:58 AM
OMG! I LOVE IT! It explains me and what I am and how I truely feel everyday.. AMAZING! Outstanding Job!
Moreno Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 12:59 PM
Sadness flows from your pen and I think some of the greatest work are from such a time in our hearts. I bid you a happy day filled with smiles from the sun. Blessings...Raul
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