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Brokenhearted

gray hair tear fill eyes no reason for existence wilted petals fall

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 5:16:00 AM

so much emotion in so few words ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/27/2020 11:22:00 AM

Sad ...Some of us are feeling these emotions now. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/26/2020 9:55:00 AM

We will fall, this day or the other...but this last lap on the circuit of life... be it full of purpose...Nice imagery

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/26/2020 12:37:00 AM

OHHH, This is very heart-piercing! I could feel the hopelessness and pain.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/25/2020 8:59:00 PM

As the hair grays and withers, so do the flower petals. Apt poetic analogy, Eve! :) gw

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/25/2020 6:17:00 PM

We become brokenhearted when we feel we are no longer needed.. when we do not feel the Love, care and the recognition.. We age in body but we need to feel the power of life and love inside us.. we need to feel there is still a reason for our existence.. a mission to accomplish.. So touching is your poetry! So beautiful a rendition! My pleasure, dear Eve! Warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2020 7:19:00 PM

Besma, your wisdom takes my breath away, you are so very right. Thank you for those kind words. I needed that. Hugs Eve

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2020 5:06:00 PM

This is really sad... Hope it is fiction

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/25/2020 2:48:00 PM

How many are feeling right now Eve, hopefully we won't have these restrictions for much longer. Tom

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/25/2020 1:30:00 PM

It is difficult for me to understand depression as I never fall asleep without thinking of something I want to do as soon as I wake up, even if it is only to write a silly limerick! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/25/2020 8:26:00 AM

Umph. My heart just fell three inches in my chest. Powerful ink. Hugs, and more hugs. xomo

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/25/2020 3:15:00 AM

no reason for existence.. is a horrible state of mind.. There should be some reason for us to find.. Great expression of depression..

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2020 2:58:00 AM

aww Eve, so few words paint a vivid picture of depression, lock down is affecting the mental health of many - not being able to see friends and family hits hard:-( hugs jan xx