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Brokenheart

Time comes and time goes. All the while my heart breaks. The memories of us flows threw my mind. The tears continue to fall. My soul longs for you. My heart calls out to you. Yet you refuse to answer their calls. I know I said I needed time and that i was confused and scared. I thought you would give me time. I never thought you would leave me. My love for you still flows stronge. So just remember I will always love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2009 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:40:00 AM
Congrats DEborah on "Brokenheart" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:49:00 AM
Hi Deborah, congrats on being featured this week. :) I could feel the pain in your writing... you expressed yourself well in this sad but beautiful poem. Sometimes life just seems so unfair... If someone does not return your love, though, then I think he was not worthy of you to begin with! *smile* God bless and I hope things are better for you soon... keep writing. Love, Amy
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:48:00 PM
Deborah - wow that is a heart wrenching thing to have happen - very well expressed - Best wishes - Congrats on being featured. God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/8/2009 3:51:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/2/2009 6:15:00 AM
Welcome to soup. Poem is full of emotions. Love does have a toil on us. But when no love is returned then we need to let it go and move on. Mama said there are more fish in the sea than one.....Great write and continue to share.
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