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Broken Wings

He sat there with his wings broken Everyone else flew In happiness, in sorrow In abundance of hope Floating in the sky Eyes full of dreams For every moment For each tomorrow Though he couldn’t fly He never let his dreams fade away His heart filled with hope Remained un-shattered One day even for a day He will float with the wind in a clear blue sky Untouched by earthly shame Nothing to hide, none to fear With no hunger for glory or fame One day, even for a day These wings will stretch Over this terrain With sheer joy That his dreams could fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/16/2011 10:17:00 AM
I thought to start from the beginning and was happy to read such a lovely poem...luv shannon
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Date: 12/31/2010 6:25:00 PM
Ashek, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Ashek. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/20/2010 4:55:00 AM
Are any of you guys use FB. If you want you can join me ashek_rahaman@hotmail.com
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Date: 11/19/2010 11:59:00 PM
This is lovely!
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Date: 11/19/2010 9:01:00 PM
thank you all very much for your kind praises.
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Date: 11/19/2010 4:42:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ... u may want to add an 'r' in your title for the word broken luv.. so it reads correctly ... hope your time on Soup will be special and fun... happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:22:00 PM
Very nice gazal you have penned so well, I appreciate it, ashek
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:40:00 AM
welcome to the Soup. this is a wonderful, inspirational piece.I believe, I can fly please keep your pen dancing to the music of your heart. you are such a great talent. keep writing. Love, Always. Adeleke
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