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Broken Winged Angel

in his arms, he took me high above the earths night air read his sweetest poetry lifting my deep despair speaking in whispered tones floating weightless in space loving each other, such delights in this heavenly place made me feel so special, said I'd be worth any wait told each other our deepest secrets feeling it was fate soon the spell was broken when then he did inquire possibilities of "love" with us a goal he did aspire my heart sank how could I when even I didn't know dropped his eyes it hurt to see his pain, so I had to show smiling looking in his eyes slowly showing my broken wing told him he'd be the first to know if I ever felt whole again

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Date: 10/20/2019 12:44:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Brenda :-) x
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thank so much Elaine!;) you really are to kind!;)
Date: 7/30/2019 1:37:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/30/2019 4:55:00 PM
Funom thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/21/2019 5:48:00 PM
Hello Brenda Chiri, that angel with the broken wing is still an angel. That will not change her. have a nice evening my friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2019 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Darlene so very much!;)
Date: 7/14/2019 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful and so warm and touching.. Love it... Hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2019 3:53:00 PM
Ah eve thank you so much for your wonderful comment!;)
Date: 7/14/2019 9:05:00 AM
If I was putting together a selected collection of your poetry, Poetess, this would most certainly be included -- splendid lttle write!! With much fondness. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2019 3:52:00 PM
Ah John you always bring a smile to my face each day! I simply love your comments! This one is rather special to me! Thank you John! All my affection!;)

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