Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Broken Winged Angel

in his arms, he took me high
above the earths night air
read his sweetest poetry 
lifting my deep despair

speaking in whispered tones 
floating weightless in space 
loving each other, such delights 
in this heavenly place

made me feel so special, said 
I'd be worth any wait
told each other our deepest 
secrets feeling it was fate

soon the spell was broken 
when then he did inquire
possibilities of "love" with 
us a goal he did aspire

my heart sank how could 
I when even I didn't know
dropped his eyes it hurt to 
see his pain, so I had to show

smiling looking in his eyes 
slowly showing my broken wing 
told him he'd be the first to 
know if I ever felt whole again

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Elaine Perrin October 20, 2019 at 12:44 PM Such a beautiful write Brenda :-) x Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:21 PM Thank so much Elaine!;) you really are to kind!;)

Funom Makama July 30, 2019 at 1:37 PM Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great.. Brenda Chiri July 30, 2019 at 4:55 PM Funom thank you so much!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu July 21, 2019 at 5:48 PM Hello Brenda Chiri, that angel with the broken wing is still an angel. That will not change her. have a nice evening my friend. Brenda Chiri July 21, 2019 at 9:47 PM Thank you Darlene so very much!;)

Eve Roper July 14, 2019 at 1:20 PM Beautiful and so warm and touching.. Love it... Hugs Brenda Chiri July 14, 2019 at 3:53 PM Ah eve thank you so much for your wonderful comment!;)

John Fleming July 14, 2019 at 9:05 AM If I was putting together a selected collection of your poetry, Poetess, this would most certainly be included -- splendid lttle write!! With much fondness. :) john Brenda Chiri July 14, 2019 at 3:52 PM Ah John you always bring a smile to my face each day! I simply love your comments! This one is rather special to me! Thank you John! All my affection!;)