Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Broken Wing

My Archangel name is Angelo
though I'm not fallen
my favorite color is Indigo
rumors spread and fall in

I was born with a fragmented clavicle
to stop me from flying
so I stay on the earth to be affable
full speed I'm vying

I can't believe what they have said
that I'm the Angel of Death conception
I'm not conscious of what text they've read
I appeared in people's dreams brethren

My name means messenger
which is what I am
forgive my lot begetter
I received the Blood of the Lamb

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Susan Ashley November 8, 2020 at 6:13 PM Angie, I love the power and beauty of your poem. You are a poetry angel, my friend. I've always loved the name Angela and it nice to know that we share a love for a favorite color too, indigo. Warmest wishes, dear poetess.. ~Susan Angela Crabtree November 9, 2020 at 12:19 PM Thank you, Susan. Yes, Indigo is so beautiful. Hope you have a great day :)

Arturo Michael November 8, 2020 at 11:47 AM I like the way you write it...like a surge of wind blowing past... Angela Crabtree November 8, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thank you, Arturo :)

Victor Buhagiar November 7, 2020 at 10:32 PM An angel ready to help really. Complex poem. ~~ Angela Crabtree November 8, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thank you for reading, Victor :)

Eve Roper November 7, 2020 at 5:09 PM Nice to know more about you, Angela. So, I had to search.AQUARIUS GUARDIAN: URIEL Uriel, lord of good luck and grace, rules Aquarius natives. This angel understands well the Aquarius’ detached and fanciful ways, helping them to put order in their lives. Oh, dear, and I need order in my life. Angela Crabtree November 8, 2020 at 2:43 PM Thank you, Eve. I think we all need a little order in our life ;)

Paul Callus November 7, 2020 at 1:30 PM Such a delightful poem, Angela, and I love the ending. The Angel of Death shall be our companion as he leads us to a new Life. (by the way, my sister Angela is very proud of her name:)) Regards // paul Angela Crabtree November 7, 2020 at 3:32 PM Thank you, Paul. Tell your sister hello for me :)

Vijay Pandit November 7, 2020 at 12:07 PM I imagine this angel--is the messenger of goodwill. You find poetry theme everywhere, Angela. Angela Crabtree November 7, 2020 at 3:32 PM Thank you, Vijay. I just try to mix it up a little. Have a great night :)