Broken Verses of Love

Look me in the eye
See the scenes of yesturday
How can i forget

















This piece inspired by: I.M
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bloomsfield Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 10:19 PM
very deep,few words with much meaning
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Some people seem more able than others to put loving feelings behind them and move on. I tend to cling too much to the past. A sad but beautifully written poem, Edward! Best wishes, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:08 AM
I really enjoyed this one.
Mehta Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Nice Senryu with apt imagery
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 4:57 PM
Very descriptive..Sara
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