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Broken Verses of Love

Look me in the eye See the scenes of yesturday How can i forget This piece inspired by: I.M

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/27/2011 10:19:00 PM
very deep,few words with much meaning
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Date: 3/27/2011 11:31:00 AM
Some people seem more able than others to put loving feelings behind them and move on. I tend to cling too much to the past. A sad but beautifully written poem, Edward! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:08:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 3/21/2011 5:42:00 PM
Nice Senryu with apt imagery
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:57:00 PM
Very descriptive..Sara
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