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Broken Trust

you stare I looked on the table and the knife pierced on it who will take the first you or I I know for sure that you will act but I'm very curious when and how it then I just close my eyes pretend to sleep so I can end my suffering by letting you stab my heart in 3 seconds

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/11/2024 11:45:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 11:39:00 AM

MUFLIH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LIND

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 9:56:00 PM

Muflih, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 9/21/2012 11:06:00 PM

Beautiful and original poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/19/2012 7:15:00 AM

A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Muflih. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol