Broken Trust

you stare
I looked
on the table
and the knife pierced on it
who will take the first
you
or I
I know for sure that you will act
but I'm very curious
when and how it
then I just close my eyes
pretend to sleep
so I can end my suffering
by letting you stab my heart in 3 seconds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 11:45 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 11:39 AM
MUFLIH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LIND
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Muflih, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
Kovrlija Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 11:06 PM
Beautiful and original poem.
Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 7:15 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Muflih. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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